What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: aircraft departed traverse city airport for Toledo, (tol). During departure another aircraft in the pattern told pilot that his gear did not appear to be fully retracted. Prior to landing pilot requested tower to verify gear was down, he stated he also had 3 green lights. Nose and r/h gear collapsed on landing. Aircraft sustained minor damage. Pilot suspected ice and slush on runway at traverse city may have caused problem, prevent gear from locking.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: AIRCRAFT DEPARTED TRAVERSE CITY AIRPORT FOR TOLEDO, (TOL). DURING DEPARTURE ANOTHER AIRCRAFT IN THE PATTERN TOLD PILOT THAT HIS GEAR DID NOT APPEAR TO BE FULLY RETRACTED. PRIOR TO LANDING PILOT REQUESTED TOWER TO VERIFY GEAR WAS DOWN, HE STATED HE ALSO HAD 3 GREEN LIGHTS. NOSE AND R/H GEAR COLLAPSED ON LANDING. AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED MINOR DAMAGE. PILOT SUSPECTED ICE AND SLUSH ON RUNWAY AT TRAVERSE CITY MAY HAVE CAUSED PROBLEM, PREVENT GEAR FROM LOCKING.