What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: parachutist - david ben-tepherith privacy data omitted Pepperell skydiver center-privacy data omitted vector-container triathilon aerodyne 120-canopy main packed by jumper reserve packed 10/19/95 by anthony carbone #18488587NYJ total jumps-92 date of last instruction 8/8/95 jumper impacted ground while attempting a steep left turn close to ground. Insufficient altitude to recover. Critical condition mass general.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: PARACHUTIST - DAVID BEN-TEPHERITH ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ PEPPERELL SKYDIVER CENTER-^PRIVACY DATA OM^ VECTOR-CONTAINER TRIATHILON AERODYNE 120-CANOPY MAIN PACKED BY JUMPER RESERVE PACKED 10/19/95 BY ANTHONY CARBONE #18488587NYJ TOTAL JUMPS-92 DATE OF LAST INSTRUCTION 8/8/95 JUMPER IMPACTED GROUND WHILE ATTEMPTING A STEEP LEFT TURN CLOSE TO GROUND. INSUFFICIENT ALTITUDE TO RECOVER. CRITICAL CONDITION MASS GENERAL.