What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: us air 247, encountered turbulence descending through 14,000 feet, 50 miles north of Bradley International Airport, Windsor Locks, CT. Two flight attendants received injuries. Sharon wilkins received a hairline fracture of the greater tuberosity and a shoulder dislocation. Roseanne young received a hairline fracture of the scapula on the left side.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: US AIR 247, ENCOUNTERED TURBULENCE DESCENDING THROUGH 14,000 FEET, 50 MILES NORTH OF BRADLEY INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT, WINDSOR LOCKS, CT. TWO FLIGHT ATTENDANTS RECEIVED INJURIES. SHARON WILKINS RECEIVED A HAIRLINE FRACTURE OF THE GREATER TUBEROSITY AND A SHOULDER DISLOCATION. ROSEANNE YOUNG RECEIVED A HAIRLINE FRACTURE OF THE SCAPULA ON THE LEFT SIDE.