What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on 5/6/96 at 1630 LCL EST, a Beechcraft BE-77, N3829Z, registered to elvie aviation, inc., rochester, NY during cruise at 4000 feet experienced a bird strike on the left outboard wing section while on a VFR flight. The wing received minor damage, no injuries incurred and the aircraft landed without incident at rochester, NY. The pilot-in-command maintained directional authority at all times. Maintenance to remove and replace outer wing panel. This incident considered closed.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON 5/6/96 AT 1630 LCL EST, A BEECHCRAFT BE-77, N3829Z, REGISTERED TO ELVIE AVIATION, INC., ROCHESTER, NY DURING CRUISE AT 4000 FEET EXPERIENCED A BIRD STRIKE ON THE LEFT OUTBOARD WING SECTION WHILE ON A VFR FLIGHT. THE WING RECEIVED MINOR DAMAGE, NO INJURIES INCURRED AND THE AIRCRAFT LANDED WITHOUT INCIDENT AT ROCHESTER, NY. THE PILOT-IN-COMMAND MAINTAINED DIRECTIONAL AUTHORITY AT ALL TIMES. MAINTENANCE TO REMOVE AND REPLACE OUTER WING PANEL. THIS INCIDENT CONSIDERED CLOSED.