What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on 5/17/96 air midwest flight 717 departed mci. The crew returned to mci due to an unusual noise in the cockpit. Maintenance found a leak on the first officers vent window. Maintenance adjusted the window hinge, operationally checked the aircraft and returned it to service. This incident is considered closed. CE96ICM0067.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON 5/17/96 AIR MIDWEST FLIGHT 717 DEPARTED MCI. THE CREW RETURNED TO MCI DUE TO AN UNUSUAL NOISE IN THE COCKPIT. MAINTENANCE FOUND A LEAK ON THE FIRST OFFICERS VENT WINDOW. MAINTENANCE ADJUSTED THE WINDOW HINGE, OPERATIONALLY CHECKED THE AIRCRAFT AND RETURNED IT TO SERVICE. THIS INCIDENT IS CONSIDERED CLOSED. CE96ICM0067.