What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on August 5, 1996, at 1635 EDT, a Piper PA-23-250, N8PS, registered to george d. harris, experienced a propeller feathering on the right side engine at lift off, while on a maintenance test flight from mcghee Tyson airport, Knoxville, TN. Landing gear retraction had been initiated when pilot elected to abort. Minor damage sustained to the aircraft. No injuries. Visual meteorological conditions prevailed.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON AUGUST 5, 1996, AT 1635 EDT, A PIPER PA-23-250, N8PS, REGISTERED TO GEORGE D. HARRIS, EXPERIENCED A PROPELLER FEATHERING ON THE RIGHT SIDE ENGINE AT LIFT OFF, WHILE ON A MAINTENANCE TEST FLIGHT FROM MCGHEE TYSON AIRPORT, KNOXVILLE, TN. LANDING GEAR RETRACTION HAD BEEN INITIATED WHEN PILOT ELECTED TO ABORT. MINOR DAMAGE SUSTAINED TO THE AIRCRAFT. NO INJURIES. VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED.