What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on 10/18/96 northwest airlink flight FLG618 was on final approach to Joplin airport, when the aircraft sustained a bird strike on the left dv window. The aircrew landed the aircraft without incident maintenance inspected the aircraft and found the left dv window had been knocked off track. Maintenance replaced the window and the aircraft is being ferried to memphis to finalize the repair. This incident is considered closed. CE0597ICM0004.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON 10/18/96 NORTHWEST AIRLINK FLIGHT FLG618 WAS ON FINAL APPROACH TO JOPLIN AIRPORT, WHEN THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED A BIRD STRIKE ON THE LEFT DV WINDOW. THE AIRCREW LANDED THE AIRCRAFT WITHOUT INCIDENT MAINTENANCE INSPECTED THE AIRCRAFT AND FOUND THE LEFT DV WINDOW HAD BEEN KNOCKED OFF TRACK. MAINTENANCE REPLACED THE WINDOW AND THE AIRCRAFT IS BEING FERRIED TO MEMPHIS TO FINALIZE THE REPAIR. THIS INCIDENT IS CONSIDERED CLOSED. CE0597ICM0004.