What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: automatic pressurization failed at 17,000 feet at 04122OZ, ATC allowed aircraft to continue at 7,000 feet. Landed at pittsburgh without further incident. Maintenance control says pressurization control panel deferred per MEL and manual pressurization used until control panel replaced 2/5/97. Has operated normally since.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: AUTOMATIC PRESSURIZATION FAILED AT 17,000 FEET AT 04122OZ, ATC ALLOWED AIRCRAFT TO CONTINUE AT 7,000 FEET. LANDED AT PITTSBURGH WITHOUT FURTHER INCIDENT. MAINTENANCE CONTROL SAYS PRESSURIZATION CONTROL PANEL DEFERRED PER MEL AND MANUAL PRESSURIZATION USED UNTIL CONTROL PANEL REPLACED 2/5/97. HAS OPERATED NORMALLY SINCE.