What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: the victim, clark keron of surrey, england, was attempting a hook turn at about 50 ft. off the pavement. He misjudged his recovers and slammed into the pavement. No equipment failure involved. Packing date for reserve 12/25/96. This was his 402 jump. He was jumping with skydive sports center, inc. at Arthur Dunn airport in Titusville. He later died at the parrish medical center.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: THE VICTIM, CLARK KERON OF SURREY, ENGLAND, WAS ATTEMPTING A HOOK TURN AT ABOUT 50 FT. OFF THE PAVEMENT. HE MISJUDGED HIS RECOVERS AND SLAMMED INTO THE PAVEMENT. NO EQUIPMENT FAILURE INVOLVED. PACKING DATE FOR RESERVE 12/25/96. THIS WAS HIS 402 JUMP. HE WAS JUMPING WITH SKYDIVE SPORTS CENTER, INC. AT ARTHUR DUNN AIRPORT IN TITUSVILLE. HE LATER DIED AT THE PARRISH MEDICAL CENTER.