What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on March 21, 1997, at approximately 1355 PST, john p. hurley landed at the Ramona, California airport on runway 27. During the landing, the fixed nose landing gear assembly collapsed. Hurley, a student pilot, on the final leg of his solo long cross-country flight, was not injured. No fire resulted. Damage to the aircraft was minor. Hurley stated that witnesses indicated that his approach was steeper than normal. Hurley was properly signed off and endorsed for this flight by his flight instructor, who was also present at the airport. This incident is being referred to the operations unit. This incident did not involve a NMAC or a pilot deviation.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON MARCH 21, 1997, AT APPROXIMATELY 1355 PST, JOHN P. HURLEY LANDED AT THE RAMONA, CALIFORNIA AIRPORT ON RUNWAY 27. DURING THE LANDING, THE FIXED NOSE LANDING GEAR ASSEMBLY COLLAPSED. HURLEY, A STUDENT PILOT, ON THE FINAL LEG OF HIS SOLO LONG CROSS-COUNTRY FLIGHT, WAS NOT INJURED. NO FIRE RESULTED. DAMAGE TO THE AIRCRAFT WAS MINOR. HURLEY STATED THAT WITNESSES INDICATED THAT HIS APPROACH WAS STEEPER THAN NORMAL. HURLEY WAS PROPERLY SIGNED OFF AND ENDORSED FOR THIS FLIGHT BY HIS FLIGHT INSTRUCTOR, WHO WAS ALSO PRESENT AT THE AIRPORT. THIS INCIDENT IS BEING REFERRED TO THE OPERATIONS UNIT. THIS INCIDENT DID NOT INVOLVE A NMAC OR A PILOT DEVIATION.