What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Mr. Shanks was practicing take offs and landings in his 2 place, powered parachute. Ground witnesses stated he drifted left after adding power after his last landing. The parachute then ended up suspended from power lines, with Mr. Shanks being unconscious. Mr. Shanks stated the reason he lost consciousness was due to lack of food and fluids prior to many takeoffs and landings. *vagal response according to his physician, Dr. Jacobs, in monticello, MN. *I did not personally talk to Dr. Jacobs of monticello, MN.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) MR. SHANKS WAS PRACTICING TAKE OFFS AND LANDINGS IN HIS 2 PLACE, POWERED PARACHUTE. GROUND WITNESSES STATED HE DRIFTED LEFT AFTER ADDING POWER AFTER HIS LAST LANDING. THE PARACHUTE THEN ENDED UP SUSPENDED FROM POWER LINES, WITH MR. SHANKS BEING UNCONSCIOUS. MR. SHANKS STATED THE REASON HE LOST CONSCIOUSNESS WAS DUE TO LACK OF FOOD AND FLUIDS PRIOR TO MANY TAKEOFFS AND LANDINGS. *VAGAL RESPONSE ACCORDING TO HIS PHYSICIAN, DR. JACOBS, IN MONTICELLO, MN. *I DID NOT PERSONALLY TALK TO DR. JACOBS OF MONTICELLO, MN.