What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: during pole grab event at balloon competition at tom sawyer park, Louisville, KY pilot allowed a high rate of descent while approaching pole to grab prize. Pilot was applying burner heat while grabbing pole. Basket struck ground and tilted in direction of flight and the burner gimballed in same direction, resulting in flame melting a hole about 18 inches in diameter in lower portion of envelope fabric. Two panels, totalling about 4 square feet, required replacement. Cause was inexperience coupled with target fixation.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: DURING POLE GRAB EVENT AT BALLOON COMPETITION AT TOM SAWYER PARK, LOUISVILLE, KY PILOT ALLOWED A HIGH RATE OF DESCENT WHILE APPROACHING POLE TO GRAB PRIZE. PILOT WAS APPLYING BURNER HEAT WHILE GRABBING POLE. BASKET STRUCK GROUND AND TILTED IN DIRECTION OF FLIGHT AND THE BURNER GIMBALLED IN SAME DIRECTION, RESULTING IN FLAME MELTING A HOLE ABOUT 18 INCHES IN DIAMETER IN LOWER PORTION OF ENVELOPE FABRIC. TWO PANELS, TOTALLING ABOUT 4 SQUARE FEET, REQUIRED REPLACEMENT. CAUSE WAS INEXPERIENCE COUPLED WITH TARGET FIXATION.