What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: on 09-09-97, at approximately 2150 MDT, while landing Salt Lake City International Airport, Salt Lake City, Utah, delta flight #1617, a B-767-232, was struck by an unknown number of birds on the right wing leading edge just inboard of the #2 engine and one bird strike on the #2 engine. The corrective action bore scoped the #2 engine and found to be within limits and the #2 engine nose cowl was replaced by maintenance. This is a final report.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: ON 09-09-97, AT APPROXIMATELY 2150 MDT, WHILE LANDING SALT LAKE CITY INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT, SALT LAKE CITY, UTAH, DELTA FLIGHT #1617, A B-767-232, WAS STRUCK BY AN UNKNOWN NUMBER OF BIRDS ON THE RIGHT WING LEADING EDGE JUST INBOARD OF THE #2 ENGINE AND ONE BIRD STRIKE ON THE #2 ENGINE. THE CORRECTIVE ACTION BORE SCOPED THE #2 ENGINE AND FOUND TO BE WITHIN LIMITS AND THE #2 ENGINE NOSE COWL WAS REPLACED BY MAINTENANCE. THIS IS A FINAL REPORT.