What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: pilot attempting an IFR approach to runway 11 in Ketchikan, Alaska. Reached decision height and copilot saw the airport. Mr. Gisler said he could see the ground but not the runway during the approach. He was about to execute a missed approach when the copilot spotted the runway. In the final stages of the approach, Ketchikan flight service station updated the weather.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: PILOT ATTEMPTING AN IFR APPROACH TO RUNWAY 11 IN KETCHIKAN, ALASKA. REACHED DECISION HEIGHT AND COPILOT SAW THE AIRPORT. MR. GISLER SAID HE COULD SEE THE GROUND BUT NOT THE RUNWAY DURING THE APPROACH. HE WAS ABOUT TO EXECUTE A MISSED APPROACH WHEN THE COPILOT SPOTTED THE RUNWAY. IN THE FINAL STAGES OF THE APPROACH, KETCHIKAN FLIGHT SERVICE STATION UPDATED THE WEATHER.