What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: Ms. Eby-buck was conducting a sales demonstration flight. She operated the flight controls during takeoff, climbout and cruise. Mr. Faltyn was evaluating the helicopter for a prospective purchaser. He operated the flight controls during cruise, approach and landing. A hard landing ensued. The tail rotor, tail rotor driveshaft and landing gear were damaged. (This amended report changes the tracking number from dtw 97071 to dtw 98001.) privacy data omitted
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: MS. EBY-BUCK WAS CONDUCTING A SALES DEMONSTRATION FLIGHT. SHE OPERATED THE FLIGHT CONTROLS DURING TAKEOFF, CLIMBOUT AND CRUISE. MR. FALTYN WAS EVALUATING THE HELICOPTER FOR A PROSPECTIVE PURCHASER. HE OPERATED THE FLIGHT CONTROLS DURING CRUISE, APPROACH AND LANDING. A HARD LANDING ENSUED. THE TAIL ROTOR, TAIL ROTOR DRIVESHAFT AND LANDING GEAR WERE DAMAGED. (THIS AMENDED REPORT CHANGES THE TRACKING NUMBER FROM DTW 97071 TO DTW 98001.) ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^