What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Narrative: aircraft departed bwi airport enroute to edaf. Flight crew requested to return to bwi, due to a passenger medical emergency. To meet landing weight restrictions, crew jettisoned approximately 93,000 lbs of fuel. At or near 12,000 feet, crew terminated fuel dump. Crew noted left hand fuel dump valve remained open after selecting fuel dump valves to the closed position. Crew stated that they followed appropriate checklists, but apparently fuel continued to be dumped according to witnesses right up through an uneventful landing. Investigation is continuing, flight engineer - paul m. lanning, 1657940 domicile 19113.
As the FAA filed it
NARRATIVE: AIRCRAFT DEPARTED BWI AIRPORT ENROUTE TO EDAF. FLIGHT CREW REQUESTED TO RETURN TO BWI, DUE TO A PASSENGER MEDICAL EMERGENCY. TO MEET LANDING WEIGHT RESTRICTIONS, CREW JETTISONED APPROXIMATELY 93,000 LBS OF FUEL. AT OR NEAR 12,000 FEET, CREW TERMINATED FUEL DUMP. CREW NOTED LEFT HAND FUEL DUMP VALVE REMAINED OPEN AFTER SELECTING FUEL DUMP VALVES TO THE CLOSED POSITION. CREW STATED THAT THEY FOLLOWED APPROPRIATE CHECKLISTS, BUT APPARENTLY FUEL CONTINUED TO BE DUMPED ACCORDING TO WITNESSES RIGHT UP THROUGH AN UNEVENTFUL LANDING. INVESTIGATION IS CONTINUING, FLIGHT ENGINEER - PAUL M. LANNING, 1657940 DOMICILE 19113.