What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On March 8, 1998, at approximately 1721 PST, Mr. Vandervalk was flying his quicksilver mxl sport 2 at the wild horse truck stop during a grand opening exhibition. While flying approximately 100 ft AGL when the boom cable failed due to a broken bolt. Mr. Vandervalk lost control of the aircraft and crashed into an asphalt parking lot. As the aircraft approached the ground it struck an unoccupied parked vehicle. Mr. Vandervalk received minor injuries. The incident investigation is now closed.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON MARCH 8, 1998, AT APPROXIMATELY 1721 PST, MR. VANDERVALK WAS FLYING HIS QUICKSILVER MXL SPORT 2 AT THE WILD HORSE TRUCK STOP DURING A GRAND OPENING EXHIBITION. WHILE FLYING APPROXIMATELY 100 FT AGL WHEN THE BOOM CABLE FAILED DUE TO A BROKEN BOLT. MR. VANDERVALK LOST CONTROL OF THE AIRCRAFT AND CRASHED INTO AN ASPHALT PARKING LOT. AS THE AIRCRAFT APPROACHED THE GROUND IT STRUCK AN UNOCCUPIED PARKED VEHICLE. MR. VANDERVALK RECEIVED MINOR INJURIES. THE INCIDENT INVESTIGATION IS NOW CLOSED.