What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Aircraft loss pressuization while enroute from ewr to lax. PIC declared an emergency. Aircraft was diverted to bna where it landed without incident. Flight crew reported # 2 pressure controller failed and #1 pressure controller did not pick up the system. Two flight crew members, 4 cabin crew members and 84 passengers were onboard. Five passengers were treated at the scene for breathing difficulties. One passengers was transported to the hospital were he was treated and released. The Nashville FSDO was not notified of the incident until after the aircraft and air crew had left Nashville. Corrective action for the maintenance problem was replaced both outflow valves and cabin pressure controllers.
As the FAA filed it
AIRCRAFT LOSS PRESSUIZATION WHILE ENROUTE FROM EWR TO LAX. PIC DECLARED AN EMERGENCY. AIRCRAFT WAS DIVERTED TO BNA WHERE IT LANDED WITHOUT INCIDENT. FLIGHT CREW REPORTED # 2 PRESSURE CONTROLLER FAILED AND #1 PRESSURE CONTROLLER DID NOT PICK UP THE SYSTEM. TWO FLIGHT CREW MEMBERS, 4 CABIN CREW MEMBERS AND 84 PASSENGERS WERE ONBOARD. FIVE PASSENGERS WERE TREATED AT THE SCENE FOR BREATHING DIFFICULTIES. ONE PASSENGERS WAS TRANSPORTED TO THE HOSPITAL WERE HE WAS TREATED AND RELEASED. THE NASHVILLE FSDO WAS NOT NOTIFIED OF THE INCIDENT UNTIL AFTER THE AIRCRAFT AND AIR CREW HAD LEFT NASHVILLE. CORRECTIVE ACTION FOR THE MAINTENANCE PROBLEM WAS REPLACED BOTH OUTFLOW VALVES AND CABIN PRESSURE CONTROLLERS.