What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
Skydiver wayne jones' parachute failed to deploy after a normal jump at approximately 9:00AM local time, Sunday sept 27, 1998 at Boulder City, Nevada. He died as a result of injuries sustained on impact. Skydiving is self-policing under U.S.p.a. and there are no applicable regulation in this case. Investigation closed 10/7/98.
As the FAA filed it
SKYDIVER WAYNE JONES' PARACHUTE FAILED TO DEPLOY AFTER A NORMAL JUMP AT APPROXIMATELY 9:00AM LOCAL TIME, SUNDAY SEPT 27, 1998 AT BOULDER CITY, NEVADA. HE DIED AS A RESULT OF INJURIES SUSTAINED ON IMPACT. SKYDIVING IS SELF-POLICING UNDER U.S.P.A. AND THERE ARE NO APPLICABLE REGULATION IN THIS CASE. INVESTIGATION CLOSED 10/7/98.