What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23)On June 16, 1999, about 14:20 MST, Mr. Michael edward champlin a non-certified pilot, was flying unpowered and un-certified ultralight vehicle called a millenium class rigid wing near Hobbs industrial airpark, Hobbs, new Mexico. While practicing spins, Mr. Champlin spun and upon recovery, had an in-flight breakup, the wings folded, plummeted to the ground and was killed at impact. Prevailing weather at time of accident was VFR.
As the FAA filed it
(-23)ON JUNE 16, 1999, ABOUT 14:20 MST, MR. MICHAEL EDWARD CHAMPLIN A NON-CERTIFIED PILOT, WAS FLYING UNPOWERED AND UN-CERTIFIED ULTRALIGHT VEHICLE CALLED A MILLENIUM CLASS RIGID WING NEAR HOBBS INDUSTRIAL AIRPARK, HOBBS, NEW MEXICO. WHILE PRACTICING SPINS, MR. CHAMPLIN SPUN AND UPON RECOVERY, HAD AN IN-FLIGHT BREAKUP, THE WINGS FOLDED, PLUMMETED TO THE GROUND AND WAS KILLED AT IMPACT. PREVAILING WEATHER AT TIME OF ACCIDENT WAS VFR.