What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Flt. 648 encountered severe turbulence 10 miles southwest of millville n.j. flight attendant received minor bruises. He was treated and released. No other injuries reported. (Earlier report of broken arm was incorrect) name of flight attendant - alex delgado. Flight was in the conditions descending through 10500. There were storms in the area. The turbulance lasted one to three seconds.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) FLT. 648 ENCOUNTERED SEVERE TURBULENCE 10 MILES SOUTHWEST OF MILLVILLE N.J. FLIGHT ATTENDANT RECEIVED MINOR BRUISES. HE WAS TREATED AND RELEASED. NO OTHER INJURIES REPORTED. (EARLIER REPORT OF BROKEN ARM WAS INCORRECT) NAME OF FLIGHT ATTENDANT - ALEX DELGADO. FLIGHT WAS IN THE CONDITIONS DESCENDING THROUGH 10500. THERE WERE STORMS IN THE AREA. THE TURBULANCE LASTED ONE TO THREE SECONDS.