What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Aircraft departed Chino, CA on November 17, 1999 on a test flight. At approx. FL250 pilot felt a thump from back of aircraft and noticed cabin rate of maxed out in positive rotation. Declared in flight emergency due to loss of cabin pressure, received IFR clearance to Chino, CA., and landed uneventfully. Post inspection of aircraft revealed water separator coupling had separated on environmental air conditioning system.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) AIRCRAFT DEPARTED CHINO, CA ON NOVEMBER 17, 1999 ON A TEST FLIGHT. AT APPROX. FL250 PILOT FELT A THUMP FROM BACK OF AIRCRAFT AND NOTICED CABIN RATE OF MAXED OUT IN POSITIVE ROTATION. DECLARED IN FLIGHT EMERGENCY DUE TO LOSS OF CABIN PRESSURE, RECEIVED IFR CLEARANCE TO CHINO, CA., AND LANDED UNEVENTFULLY. POST INSPECTION OF AIRCRAFT REVEALED WATER SEPARATOR COUPLING HAD SEPARATED ON ENVIRONMENTAL AIR CONDITIONING SYSTEM.