What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23)On Saturday April 22, 2000, privacy data omitted was attempting a landing at Greers Ferry lake, AR. When he landed short of the runway and suffered a hard landing resulting in substantial damage to his amateur built experimental registered, RV-6, N111TJ s/n 001. privacy data omitted States there was a downdraft causing him to land short of his intended touchdown point.
As the FAA filed it
(-23)ON SATURDAY APRIL 22, 2000, ^PRIVACY DAT^ WAS ATTEMPTING A LANDING AT GREERS FERRY LAKE, AR. WHEN HE LANDED SHORT OF THE RUNWAY AND SUFFERED A HARD LANDING RESULTING IN SUBSTANTIAL DAMAGE TO HIS AMATEUR BUILT EXPERIMENTAL REGISTERED, RV-6, N111TJ S/N 001. ^PRIVACY DAT^ STATES THERE WAS A DOWNDRAFT CAUSING HIM TO LAND SHORT OF HIS INTENDED TOUCHDOWN POINT.