What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On Tuesday, November 21, 2000, a convair 340 (CV5800), N391FL, FLIGHT1153, operated by control air cargo airlines, during approach to Rochester international airport in Rochester, new york expereienced an unsafe nose gear indication. A landing was accomplished without incident. Fire and rescue responded. There were no injuries. The aircraft tanied to the ramp. The mechanics found a loose wire on a terminal block in the nose gear compartment electrical junction box. The mechanic tightened the loose electrical wire. An operational check was satisfactory and the aircraft was released for service. This incident is considered closed.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON TUESDAY, NOVEMBER 21, 2000, A CONVAIR 340 (CV5800), N391FL, FLIGHT1153, OPERATED BY CONTROL AIR CARGO AIRLINES, DURING APPROACH TO ROCHESTER INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT IN ROCHESTER, NEW YORK EXPEREIENCED AN UNSAFE NOSE GEAR INDICATION. A LANDING WAS ACCOMPLISHED WITHOUT INCIDENT. FIRE AND RESCUE RESPONDED. THERE WERE NO INJURIES. THE AIRCRAFT TANIED TO THE RAMP. THE MECHANICS FOUND A LOOSE WIRE ON A TERMINAL BLOCK IN THE NOSE GEAR COMPARTMENT ELECTRICAL JUNCTION BOX. THE MECHANIC TIGHTENED THE LOOSE ELECTRICAL WIRE. AN OPERATIONAL CHECK WAS SATISFACTORY AND THE AIRCRAFT WAS RELEASED FOR SERVICE. THIS INCIDENT IS CONSIDERED CLOSED.