What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On may 3, 2001 at 1700 EDT, a Cessna 172M, registered to scott walker, experienced an engine failure. The pilot tried to make an emergency landing on a golf course, but was unable and landed in the Tampa bay in approximately 20 inches of water and 20 feet from shore. The aircraft sustained minor damage. The pilot and passenger sustained minor injuries. The flight originated at key west, Florida to clearwater, Florida, may 3, 2001, at 1530 hours.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON MAY 3, 2001 AT 1700 EDT, A CESSNA 172M, REGISTERED TO SCOTT WALKER, EXPERIENCED AN ENGINE FAILURE. THE PILOT TRIED TO MAKE AN EMERGENCY LANDING ON A GOLF COURSE, BUT WAS UNABLE AND LANDED IN THE TAMPA BAY IN APPROXIMATELY 20 INCHES OF WATER AND 20 FEET FROM SHORE. THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED MINOR DAMAGE. THE PILOT AND PASSENGER SUSTAINED MINOR INJURIES. THE FLIGHT ORIGINATED AT KEY WEST, FLORIDA TO CLEARWATER, FLORIDA, MAY 3, 2001, AT 1530 HOURS.