What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Order 8020.11B, chapter 6, para. 265 parachute jumping, page 613 1. Name of jumpers : student privacy data omitted, 35/instructor privacy data omitted 2 jumper experience: privacy data omitted 1000 plus jumps, privacy data omitted 1st student jump 3. Club affiliation: skydive Utah 4. Parachute description: strong enterprises, orlando, FL. Model: dual hawk tandum, main chute experienced partial deployment/reserve chute "pilot" became entangled in overhead main chute.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ORDER 8020.11B, CHAPTER 6, PARA. 265 PARACHUTE JUMPING, PAGE 613 1. NAME OF JUMPERS : STUDENT ^PRIVACY DATA OM^, 35/INSTRUCTOR ^PRIVACY DATA ^ 2 JUMPER EXPERIENCE: ^PRIVACY DAT^ 1000 PLUS JUMPS, ^PRIVACY DATA OM^ 1ST STUDENT JUMP 3. CLUB AFFILIATION: SKYDIVE UTAH 4. PARACHUTE DESCRIPTION: STRONG ENTERPRISES, ORLANDO, FL. MODEL: DUAL HAWK TANDUM, MAIN CHUTE EXPERIENCED PARTIAL DEPLOYMENT/RESERVE CHUTE "PILOT" BECAME ENTANGLED IN OVERHEAD MAIN CHUTE.