What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Investigated incident involving a skydiver which resulted in a fatality: on July 18, 2001, around 2110 (8:10 pm) a skydiver was fatally injured when he was performing a normal (free fall) jump from an aircraft, his main parachute deployed from its pack but did not open up. He successfully cut the main chute away and proceeded to deploy his reserve chute. According to witness he was in a spin when he deployed the reserve chute, this caused the chute to become tangled thus failing to open. There were no other injuries.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) INVESTIGATED INCIDENT INVOLVING A SKYDIVER WHICH RESULTED IN A FATALITY: ON JULY 18, 2001, AROUND 2110 (8:10 PM) A SKYDIVER WAS FATALLY INJURED WHEN HE WAS PERFORMING A NORMAL (FREE FALL) JUMP FROM AN AIRCRAFT, HIS MAIN PARACHUTE DEPLOYED FROM ITS PACK BUT DID NOT OPEN UP. HE SUCCESSFULLY CUT THE MAIN CHUTE AWAY AND PROCEEDED TO DEPLOY HIS RESERVE CHUTE. ACCORDING TO WITNESS HE WAS IN A SPIN WHEN HE DEPLOYED THE RESERVE CHUTE, THIS CAUSED THE CHUTE TO BECOME TANGLED THUS FAILING TO OPEN. THERE WERE NO OTHER INJURIES.