What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) During 14 CFR part 91 instrument meteorological conditions, the aircraft experienced what the pilot determined to be an alternator failure. The pilot requested to divert to pontiac (pnt). Air traffic cleared the flight for the GPS rwy 24 approach to pnt and asked if the pilot was declaring an emergency. The pilot replied affirmative. During the approach to pnt, air traffic informed the pilot that better conditions existed at central Illinois regional airport (bmi), Bloomington, IL. Pilot accepted vectors to bmi and landed without incident.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) DURING 14 CFR PART 91 INSTRUMENT METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS, THE AIRCRAFT EXPERIENCED WHAT THE PILOT DETERMINED TO BE AN ALTERNATOR FAILURE. THE PILOT REQUESTED TO DIVERT TO PONTIAC (PNT). AIR TRAFFIC CLEARED THE FLIGHT FOR THE GPS RWY 24 APPROACH TO PNT AND ASKED IF THE PILOT WAS DECLARING AN EMERGENCY. THE PILOT REPLIED AFFIRMATIVE. DURING THE APPROACH TO PNT, AIR TRAFFIC INFORMED THE PILOT THAT BETTER CONDITIONS EXISTED AT CENTRAL ILLINOIS REGIONAL AIRPORT (BMI), BLOOMINGTON, IL. PILOT ACCEPTED VECTORS TO BMI AND LANDED WITHOUT INCIDENT.