What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On approach to vny, pilot noted that landing gear did not sound like it locked down, gear unsafe light remained on, gear down lock light not on. Conducted fly-by, vny ATCT reported gear appeared to be down. Pilot elected to return to sna due to it being his home airport. Emergency extend and maneuvers were attempted without success. Pilot burned off excess fuel and reported to sna ATCT that gear appears unsafe due to light being on. Conducted landing attempt, found left gear began to collapse, executed go around. Pilot again burned excess fuel and prepared for gear collapse landing. Aircraft landed, left gear collapsed with minimal damage to aircraft.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON APPROACH TO VNY, PILOT NOTED THAT LANDING GEAR DID NOT SOUND LIKE IT LOCKED DOWN, GEAR UNSAFE LIGHT REMAINED ON, GEAR DOWN LOCK LIGHT NOT ON. CONDUCTED FLY-BY, VNY ATCT REPORTED GEAR APPEARED TO BE DOWN. PILOT ELECTED TO RETURN TO SNA DUE TO IT BEING HIS HOME AIRPORT. EMERGENCY EXTEND AND MANEUVERS WERE ATTEMPTED WITHOUT SUCCESS. PILOT BURNED OFF EXCESS FUEL AND REPORTED TO SNA ATCT THAT GEAR APPEARS UNSAFE DUE TO LIGHT BEING ON. CONDUCTED LANDING ATTEMPT, FOUND LEFT GEAR BEGAN TO COLLAPSE, EXECUTED GO AROUND. PILOT AGAIN BURNED EXCESS FUEL AND PREPARED FOR GEAR COLLAPSE LANDING. AIRCRAFT LANDED, LEFT GEAR COLLAPSED WITH MINIMAL DAMAGE TO AIRCRAFT.