What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) The aircraft was climbing to 17000 ft when the right engine oil pressure warning came on. The pilot declared an emergency and requested to return to Champaign, IL. The aircraft landed without incident. An investigation by maintenance personnel found the right oil pressure transducer had failed. Company mechanics replaced the transducer and approved the aircraft for return to service.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) THE AIRCRAFT WAS CLIMBING TO 17000 FT WHEN THE RIGHT ENGINE OIL PRESSURE WARNING CAME ON. THE PILOT DECLARED AN EMERGENCY AND REQUESTED TO RETURN TO CHAMPAIGN, IL. THE AIRCRAFT LANDED WITHOUT INCIDENT. AN INVESTIGATION BY MAINTENANCE PERSONNEL FOUND THE RIGHT OIL PRESSURE TRANSDUCER HAD FAILED. COMPANY MECHANICS REPLACED THE TRANSDUCER AND APPROVED THE AIRCRAFT FOR RETURN TO SERVICE.