What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) 9/23/02--1239--ON climb out from San Diego, flight encountered a flock of birds. The crew declared an emergency and diverted to los angeles. The landing was uneventful. Post flight inspection determined the radome, the bulkhead behind the radome and the #3 leading edge slat, on the right wing, sustained damage. The aircraft was taken out of service. Further investigation revealed minor damage to the leading edge of the right wing. Maintenance replaced the radome, the #3 leading edge slat and did interim repairs to the wind leading edge and the bulkhead behind the radome. The aircraft was maintenance ferried to tulsa for permanent repairs, on 09/25/02.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) 9/23/02--1239--ON CLIMB OUT FROM SAN DIEGO, FLIGHT ENCOUNTERED A FLOCK OF BIRDS. THE CREW DECLARED AN EMERGENCY AND DIVERTED TO LOS ANGELES. THE LANDING WAS UNEVENTFUL. POST FLIGHT INSPECTION DETERMINED THE RADOME, THE BULKHEAD BEHIND THE RADOME AND THE #3 LEADING EDGE SLAT, ON THE RIGHT WING, SUSTAINED DAMAGE. THE AIRCRAFT WAS TAKEN OUT OF SERVICE. FURTHER INVESTIGATION REVEALED MINOR DAMAGE TO THE LEADING EDGE OF THE RIGHT WING. MAINTENANCE REPLACED THE RADOME, THE #3 LEADING EDGE SLAT AND DID INTERIM REPAIRS TO THE WIND LEADING EDGE AND THE BULKHEAD BEHIND THE RADOME. THE AIRCRAFT WAS MAINTENANCE FERRIED TO TULSA FOR PERMANENT REPAIRS, ON 09/25/02.