What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) 1.) privacy data omitted 2.) D-11658, highly experienced 4000+ 3.) Club: uspa 037997 4.) Parachute record logs: last packed 08/10/2002 by parachute rigger colin potter, 503944345 reserve canopy: precision parachute co. raven model 2, serial no. 251246, date of manufacture 12/85 harness & container: TDM-11 sweethog SH-00014A-211, serial no. 0653, date of manufacture 12/85
As the FAA filed it
(-23) 1.) ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ 2.) D-11658, HIGHLY EXPERIENCED 4000+ 3.) CLUB: USPA 037997 4.) PARACHUTE RECORD LOGS: LAST PACKED 08/10/2002 BY PARACHUTE RIGGER COLIN POTTER, 503944345 RESERVE CANOPY: PRECISION PARACHUTE CO. RAVEN MODEL 2, SERIAL NO. 251246, DATE OF MANUFACTURE 12/85 HARNESS & CONTAINER: TDM-11 SWEETHOG SH-00014A-211, SERIAL NO. 0653, DATE OF MANUFACTURE 12/85