What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On June 2, 2003 at 2032 CDT a A-210 balloon N8000J, operated by harold graves, during landing impacted a chimney on a house and electrical wires. At approximately 18:45 CDT, Mr. Graves took flight from rennebohm park. Rennebohm park is located south of lake mendato Madison Wisconsin. Mr. Graves flew west for approximately 1 hour and when he came to land he said he hit a squall, which blew him over lake mendota. Mr. Graves stated he had been flying for 1 hour ant 45 minutes and was gettin low on fuel. Mr. Graves stated he attempted a landing, hitting a chimney and electrical wires. This was a commercial flight 9 people on board. No injuries, visual meteorological conditions prevailed at the time.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON JUNE 2, 2003 AT 2032 CDT A A-210 BALLOON N8000J, OPERATED BY HAROLD GRAVES, DURING LANDING IMPACTED A CHIMNEY ON A HOUSE AND ELECTRICAL WIRES. AT APPROXIMATELY 18:45 CDT, MR. GRAVES TOOK FLIGHT FROM RENNEBOHM PARK. RENNEBOHM PARK IS LOCATED SOUTH OF LAKE MENDATO MADISON WISCONSIN. MR. GRAVES FLEW WEST FOR APPROXIMATELY 1 HOUR AND WHEN HE CAME TO LAND HE SAID HE HIT A SQUALL, WHICH BLEW HIM OVER LAKE MENDOTA. MR. GRAVES STATED HE HAD BEEN FLYING FOR 1 HOUR ANT 45 MINUTES AND WAS GETTIN LOW ON FUEL. MR. GRAVES STATED HE ATTEMPTED A LANDING, HITTING A CHIMNEY AND ELECTRICAL WIRES. THIS WAS A COMMERCIAL FLIGHT 9 PEOPLE ON BOARD. NO INJURIES, VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED AT THE TIME.