What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) 1. (Name) privacy data omitted 2. (Experience) 200 jumps, uspa "c" license 3. (Club) the "sky divin place" 205 carlise street, hanover, PA 17331. 4. (Equipment) main=para-flit ZX-145, s/n TZX-04048, reserve=performance design-PD143R, s/n 143R6213, container=relative workshop, vector 2V-1-2, s/n 30322. Main packed by jumper prior to jump, reserve last packed 08-07-2003 by a certificated rigger. After an uneventful freefall from 8000' MSL and initial canopy descent, the jumper ws observed making a "hook-turn" @ 50' AGL. Jumper struck ground and bounced coming to rest on his left side. Jumper was air lifted to hospital with broken right ankle. Jumper remains in coma as of the date of this report. Jump partner stated that jumper was not wearing a protective helmet.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) 1. (NAME) ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ 2. (EXPERIENCE) 200 JUMPS, USPA "C" LICENSE 3. (CLUB) THE "SKY DIVIN PLACE" 205 CARLISE STREET, HANOVER, PA 17331. 4. (EQUIPMENT) MAIN=PARA-FLIT ZX-145, S/N TZX-04048, RESERVE=PERFORMANCE DESIGN-PD143R, S/N 143R6213, CONTAINER=RELATIVE WORKSHOP, VECTOR 2V-1-2, S/N 30322. MAIN PACKED BY JUMPER PRIOR TO JUMP, RESERVE LAST PACKED 08-07-2003 BY A CERTIFICATED RIGGER. AFTER AN UNEVENTFUL FREEFALL FROM 8000' MSL AND INITIAL CANOPY DESCENT, THE JUMPER WS OBSERVED MAKING A "HOOK-TURN" @ 50' AGL. JUMPER STRUCK GROUND AND BOUNCED COMING TO REST ON HIS LEFT SIDE. JUMPER WAS AIR LIFTED TO HOSPITAL WITH BROKEN RIGHT ANKLE. JUMPER REMAINS IN COMA AS OF THE DATE OF THIS REPORT. JUMP PARTNER STATED THAT JUMPER WAS NOT WEARING A PROTECTIVE HELMET.