What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On 10/30/2003 Mr. Thomas j. manella was the pilot of his amateur built aircraft. During landing on runway 24 the aircraft touched down approximately 500 feet beyond the threshold to the extreme right of the runway. The pilot stated he encountered severe crosswind during touch down and the aircraft veered off the runway into rough ground. The aircraft sustained minor damage.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON 10/30/2003 MR. THOMAS J. MANELLA WAS THE PILOT OF HIS AMATEUR BUILT AIRCRAFT. DURING LANDING ON RUNWAY 24 THE AIRCRAFT TOUCHED DOWN APPROXIMATELY 500 FEET BEYOND THE THRESHOLD TO THE EXTREME RIGHT OF THE RUNWAY. THE PILOT STATED HE ENCOUNTERED SEVERE CROSSWIND DURING TOUCH DOWN AND THE AIRCRAFT VEERED OFF THE RUNWAY INTO ROUGH GROUND. THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED MINOR DAMAGE.