What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On 1/09/2004 student pilot vincent a. pesce was being administered his private pilot practical test by designated pilot examiner james j. urcinole. During cruise flight cockpit filled with smoke, emergency procedures were followed. Aircraft diverted to original departure point (kcdw), landed on runway 9 without incident. Inspection of the aircraft revealed a blown crank shaft seal. Maintenance and defect report to follow. Engine total time 1446.6, engine serial #L11216-15.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON 1/09/2004 STUDENT PILOT VINCENT A. PESCE WAS BEING ADMINISTERED HIS PRIVATE PILOT PRACTICAL TEST BY DESIGNATED PILOT EXAMINER JAMES J. URCINOLE. DURING CRUISE FLIGHT COCKPIT FILLED WITH SMOKE, EMERGENCY PROCEDURES WERE FOLLOWED. AIRCRAFT DIVERTED TO ORIGINAL DEPARTURE POINT (KCDW), LANDED ON RUNWAY 9 WITHOUT INCIDENT. INSPECTION OF THE AIRCRAFT REVEALED A BLOWN CRANK SHAFT SEAL. MAINTENANCE AND DEFECT REPORT TO FOLLOW. ENGINE TOTAL TIME 1446.6, ENGINE SERIAL #L11216-15.