What happened
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(-23) On June 27, 2004, at approximately 1100 MDT, Mr. Harvey e. buskirk, jr. was acting as a parachute instructor with skydive new Mexico. Mr. Buskirk and his student exited the aircraft at 10,000 AGL and began working on docking procedures. At 5,000 feet, they separated and deployed their main parachutes. The student noticed that Mr. Buskirk was spiraling down, but thought that since he was so experienced that he was just losing altitude faster to land. When the student noticed Mr. Buskirk again, he saw that Mr. Buskirk's arms were at his side and that his head was laid back. After Mr. Buskirk impacted the ground, the student ran to Mr. Buskirk and tried to render cpr with no reaction. Fire department and parmedics arrived on the scene pronouncing Mr. Buskirk deceased. There were three jumpers aboard the aircraft besides Mr. Buskirk. All witnesses said that Mr. Buskirk was acting and behaving normally during the ascent.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON JUNE 27, 2004, AT APPROXIMATELY 1100 MDT, MR. HARVEY E. BUSKIRK, JR. WAS ACTING AS A PARACHUTE INSTRUCTOR WITH SKYDIVE NEW MEXICO. MR. BUSKIRK AND HIS STUDENT EXITED THE AIRCRAFT AT 10,000 AGL AND BEGAN WORKING ON DOCKING PROCEDURES. AT 5,000 FEET, THEY SEPARATED AND DEPLOYED THEIR MAIN PARACHUTES. THE STUDENT NOTICED THAT MR. BUSKIRK WAS SPIRALING DOWN, BUT THOUGHT THAT SINCE HE WAS SO EXPERIENCED THAT HE WAS JUST LOSING ALTITUDE FASTER TO LAND. WHEN THE STUDENT NOTICED MR. BUSKIRK AGAIN, HE SAW THAT MR. BUSKIRK'S ARMS WERE AT HIS SIDE AND THAT HIS HEAD WAS LAID BACK. AFTER MR. BUSKIRK IMPACTED THE GROUND, THE STUDENT RAN TO MR. BUSKIRK AND TRIED TO RENDER CPR WITH NO REACTION. FIRE DEPARTMENT AND PARMEDICS ARRIVED ON THE SCENE PRONOUNCING MR. BUSKIRK DECEASED. THERE WERE THREE JUMPERS ABOARD THE AIRCRAFT BESIDES MR. BUSKIRK. ALL WITNESSES SAID THAT MR. BUSKIRK WAS ACTING AND BEHAVING NORMALLY DURING THE ASCENT.