What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Pilot was taxiing the airplane for takeoff on a sightseeing tour. He noticed the left main landing gear starting to smoke. The airplane was stopped and passengers removed. The left main landing gear inboard brake was leaking hdy. Fluid on the brake rotor. The fluid leaking on the rotor started the smoke. There was no fire. The pilot after evacuating the passenger assisted the fire department assessing any further damage. Corrective action: maintenance personnel repaired the brake caliper with a new "o" packing. No further leaks noted.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) PILOT WAS TAXIING THE AIRPLANE FOR TAKEOFF ON A SIGHTSEEING TOUR. HE NOTICED THE LEFT MAIN LANDING GEAR STARTING TO SMOKE. THE AIRPLANE WAS STOPPED AND PASSENGERS REMOVED. THE LEFT MAIN LANDING GEAR INBOARD BRAKE WAS LEAKING HDY. FLUID ON THE BRAKE ROTOR. THE FLUID LEAKING ON THE ROTOR STARTED THE SMOKE. THERE WAS NO FIRE. THE PILOT AFTER EVACUATING THE PASSENGER ASSISTED THE FIRE DEPARTMENT ASSESSING ANY FURTHER DAMAGE. CORRECTIVE ACTION: MAINTENANCE PERSONNEL REPAIRED THE BRAKE CALIPER WITH A NEW "O" PACKING. NO FURTHER LEAKS NOTED.