What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) The pilot had recently purchased his Bellanca and was flying it home to Minnesota. During a routine fuel stop at Rochester, Minnesota, the pilot experienced surface winds that exceeded his limitations. The pilot executed an approach and then a go-around, due to his discomfort with the landing flare. He then attempted a second approach and landing, but this time he did not properly arrest his descent, hence the pilot experienced a hard touchdown which damaged the landing gear. He executed another go-around and then attempted a third landing. It was on this third landing that the nose gear collapsed upon touchdown. The pilot was the sole occupant of the aircraft and he was not injured. The pilot began flying again in may of 2004. Prior to may, he last flew in the 1970S. Even though he has about 2,000 hours total flight time, nearly all of that time is in the distant past. The pilot lacks proficiency and skills and was very unfamiliar with the characteristics of his recently purchased Bellanca.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) THE PILOT HAD RECENTLY PURCHASED HIS BELLANCA AND WAS FLYING IT HOME TO MINNESOTA. DURING A ROUTINE FUEL STOP AT ROCHESTER, MINNESOTA, THE PILOT EXPERIENCED SURFACE WINDS THAT EXCEEDED HIS LIMITATIONS. THE PILOT EXECUTED AN APPROACH AND THEN A GO-AROUND, DUE TO HIS DISCOMFORT WITH THE LANDING FLARE. HE THEN ATTEMPTED A SECOND APPROACH AND LANDING, BUT THIS TIME HE DID NOT PROPERLY ARREST HIS DESCENT, HENCE THE PILOT EXPERIENCED A HARD TOUCHDOWN WHICH DAMAGED THE LANDING GEAR. HE EXECUTED ANOTHER GO-AROUND AND THEN ATTEMPTED A THIRD LANDING. IT WAS ON THIS THIRD LANDING THAT THE NOSE GEAR COLLAPSED UPON TOUCHDOWN. THE PILOT WAS THE SOLE OCCUPANT OF THE AIRCRAFT AND HE WAS NOT INJURED. THE PILOT BEGAN FLYING AGAIN IN MAY OF 2004. PRIOR TO MAY, HE LAST FLEW IN THE 1970S. EVEN THOUGH HE HAS ABOUT 2,000 HOURS TOTAL FLIGHT TIME, NEARLY ALL OF THAT TIME IS IN THE DISTANT PAST. THE PILOT LACKS PROFICIENCY AND SKILLS AND WAS VERY UNFAMILIAR WITH THE CHARACTERISTICS OF HIS RECENTLY PURCHASED BELLANCA.