What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Canopy departed aircraft 6-8 miles south/southeast of Elizabeth, CO. Just after finishing a loop, 10-15 seconds after straight and level during a demonstration by the pilot privacy data omitted. Canopy hinged on right side popped off the nylon guides and damaged the right lower wing with a fabric tear. Right horizontal stab received a fabric tear on the leading edge also.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) CANOPY DEPARTED AIRCRAFT 6-8 MILES SOUTH/SOUTHEAST OF ELIZABETH, CO. JUST AFTER FINISHING A LOOP, 10-15 SECONDS AFTER STRAIGHT AND LEVEL DURING A DEMONSTRATION BY THE PILOT ^PRIVACY DATA^. CANOPY HINGED ON RIGHT SIDE POPPED OFF THE NYLON GUIDES AND DAMAGED THE RIGHT LOWER WING WITH A FABRIC TEAR. RIGHT HORIZONTAL STAB RECEIVED A FABRIC TEAR ON THE LEADING EDGE ALSO.