What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) N556UA, B757-222, being operated as united airlines flight 565, enrouge dsm to den, declared emergency and diverted to oma after loss of cabin pressure. Contract maintenance inspected the aircraft, noting that the lower pressure relief valve outer door was open with insulating material hanging out. They replaced the lower positive pressure relief (safety) valve.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) N556UA, B757-222, BEING OPERATED AS UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 565, ENROUGE DSM TO DEN, DECLARED EMERGENCY AND DIVERTED TO OMA AFTER LOSS OF CABIN PRESSURE. CONTRACT MAINTENANCE INSPECTED THE AIRCRAFT, NOTING THAT THE LOWER PRESSURE RELIEF VALVE OUTER DOOR WAS OPEN WITH INSULATING MATERIAL HANGING OUT. THEY REPLACED THE LOWER POSITIVE PRESSURE RELIEF (SAFETY) VALVE.