What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) After reaching an altitude of 2800 feet and descending for an open field landing, the balloon envelope brushed against some high voltage electrical power lines near dillon road and interstate 10, Coachella, CA. Eventually landing and evacuating the passengers from the basket, the pilot discovered no damage to the balloon envelope or it's basket.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) AFTER REACHING AN ALTITUDE OF 2800 FEET AND DESCENDING FOR AN OPEN FIELD LANDING, THE BALLOON ENVELOPE BRUSHED AGAINST SOME HIGH VOLTAGE ELECTRICAL POWER LINES NEAR DILLON ROAD AND INTERSTATE 10, COACHELLA, CA. EVENTUALLY LANDING AND EVACUATING THE PASSENGERS FROM THE BASKET, THE PILOT DISCOVERED NO DAMAGE TO THE BALLOON ENVELOPE OR IT'S BASKET.