What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On a part 91 reposition flight from sun valley, Idaho, to vny, the pilots experienced a vibration. The pilots performed checklist procedures, shut down left engine and landed at fat without incident. AWP-VNY-FSDO-01 is the chdo for this operator, and is aware of the incident. Received a copy of e-mail sent to privacy data omitted, pmi, vny FSDO, sent to him by privacy data omitted, chief inspector for clay lacy aviation. privacy data omitted Indicated he will send a report to ^priva^ iaw FAR 135 requirements.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON A PART 91 REPOSITION FLIGHT FROM SUN VALLEY, IDAHO, TO VNY, THE PILOTS EXPERIENCED A VIBRATION. THE PILOTS PERFORMED CHECKLIST PROCEDURES, SHUT DOWN LEFT ENGINE AND LANDED AT FAT WITHOUT INCIDENT. AWP-VNY-FSDO-01 IS THE CHDO FOR THIS OPERATOR, AND IS AWARE OF THE INCIDENT. RECEIVED A COPY OF E-MAIL SENT TO ^PRIVACY DATA^, PMI, VNY FSDO, SENT TO HIM BY ^PRIVACY DATA^, CHIEF INSPECTOR FOR CLAY LACY AVIATION. ^PRIVACY DATA^ INDICATED HE WILL SEND A REPORT TO ^PRIVA^ IAW FAR 135 REQUIREMENTS.