What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) After departing rwy 23 at kmmu, encountered "bird strike" at approximately 800FT MSL (1 mile sw of arpt on kmmu 5DP). Slats remained in the extended position due to apparent damage on the right side "outboard slate." Requested vectors from NY ATC to burn off fuel. After approximately one hour returned to kmmu for a normal approach and landing. All aircraft systems were normal.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) AFTER DEPARTING RWY 23 AT KMMU, ENCOUNTERED "BIRD STRIKE" AT APPROXIMATELY 800FT MSL (1 MILE SW OF ARPT ON KMMU 5DP). SLATS REMAINED IN THE EXTENDED POSITION DUE TO APPARENT DAMAGE ON THE RIGHT SIDE "OUTBOARD SLATE." REQUESTED VECTORS FROM NY ATC TO BURN OFF FUEL. AFTER APPROXIMATELY ONE HOUR RETURNED TO KMMU FOR A NORMAL APPROACH AND LANDING. ALL AIRCRAFT SYSTEMS WERE NORMAL.