What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Jumpers exited at 14,300 feet. Deployed chutes at 3000 feet. After chute deployment jumper 1 collided with jumper 2. Jumper 1 under canopy was limp in harness to the ground after collision. Jumper 2 landed uneventful. Remaining jumpers landed uneventful. Experienced of jumper 1 privacy data omitted total jumps 2296, uspa D-6210, 30 years in sport, vector 2, n aad, main pd 230, reserve pd 176, packed 07-16-2006. Jumper 2 privacy data omitted total jumps 200 uspa. privacy data omitted
As the FAA filed it
(-23) JUMPERS EXITED AT 14,300 FEET. DEPLOYED CHUTES AT 3000 FEET. AFTER CHUTE DEPLOYMENT JUMPER 1 COLLIDED WITH JUMPER 2. JUMPER 1 UNDER CANOPY WAS LIMP IN HARNESS TO THE GROUND AFTER COLLISION. JUMPER 2 LANDED UNEVENTFUL. REMAINING JUMPERS LANDED UNEVENTFUL. EXPERIENCED OF JUMPER 1 ^PRIVACY DATA OMIT^ TOTAL JUMPS 2296, USPA D-6210, 30 YEARS IN SPORT, VECTOR 2, N AAD, MAIN PD 230, RESERVE PD 176, PACKED 07-16-2006. JUMPER 2 ^PRIVACY DATA^ TOTAL JUMPS 200 USPA. ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^