What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Pilot departed Independence California airport. Pilot attempted to climb for terrain clearance. Subsequently the aircraft failed to maintain a climb due to what the pilot stated was severe windshear. Pilot elected to land aircraft straight ahead as turning back to the airport was not an option due to rising terrain. During the landing phase aircraft left hand wind auxiliary tank clipped a tree which caused aircraft to pitch downward and to the left. The aircraft came to a rest in a nose down position. Pilot exited aircraft and was met shortly after by the U.S. Forest service. Pilot arrived at the FSDO this date to provide this statement which will also be made part of the office file.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) PILOT DEPARTED INDEPENDENCE CALIFORNIA AIRPORT. PILOT ATTEMPTED TO CLIMB FOR TERRAIN CLEARANCE. SUBSEQUENTLY THE AIRCRAFT FAILED TO MAINTAIN A CLIMB DUE TO WHAT THE PILOT STATED WAS SEVERE WINDSHEAR. PILOT ELECTED TO LAND AIRCRAFT STRAIGHT AHEAD AS TURNING BACK TO THE AIRPORT WAS NOT AN OPTION DUE TO RISING TERRAIN. DURING THE LANDING PHASE AIRCRAFT LEFT HAND WIND AUXILIARY TANK CLIPPED A TREE WHICH CAUSED AIRCRAFT TO PITCH DOWNWARD AND TO THE LEFT. THE AIRCRAFT CAME TO A REST IN A NOSE DOWN POSITION. PILOT EXITED AIRCRAFT AND WAS MET SHORTLY AFTER BY THE U.S. FOREST SERVICE. PILOT ARRIVED AT THE FSDO THIS DATE TO PROVIDE THIS STATEMENT WHICH WILL ALSO BE MADE PART OF THE OFFICE FILE.