What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On August 8, 2006, at approximately 2:10 pm CDT, a Mooney 20-J, N8210J, collided with a deer during takeoff from the Mcalester, OK airport. Subsequently, the commercially rated pilot returned to the airport where he made a successful landing. The aircraft sustained minor damage. The pilot was not injured. VFR weather conditions prevailed at the time of the incident.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON AUGUST 8, 2006, AT APPROXIMATELY 2:10 PM CDT, A MOONEY 20-J, N8210J, COLLIDED WITH A DEER DURING TAKEOFF FROM THE MCALESTER, OK AIRPORT. SUBSEQUENTLY, THE COMMERCIALLY RATED PILOT RETURNED TO THE AIRPORT WHERE HE MADE A SUCCESSFUL LANDING. THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED MINOR DAMAGE. THE PILOT WAS NOT INJURED. VFR WEATHER CONDITIONS PREVAILED AT THE TIME OF THE INCIDENT.