What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) The following information is required by FAA order 8020.11 for parachute jumping incidents: 1) name of jumper: privacy data omitted 2) experience and training of jumper: 4 tandom jumps during primary training. A total of 9 jumps and still in training. 3) club affiliation: skydive spaceland. 4) description of the parachutes and their packing records: the harness and container were javelin manufactured by sunpath products, inc., the date of manufacturer was 04-2006. The reserve parachute had the required packing card and had been repacked on 03-07-2008 by a master rigger. The cypress unit for the reserve parachute had a battery replacement in sept. 2007 as indicated on the reserve parachute inspection card.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) THE FOLLOWING INFORMATION IS REQUIRED BY FAA ORDER 8020.11 FOR PARACHUTE JUMPING INCIDENTS: 1) NAME OF JUMPER: ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ 2) EXPERIENCE AND TRAINING OF JUMPER: 4 TANDOM JUMPS DURING PRIMARY TRAINING. A TOTAL OF 9 JUMPS AND STILL IN TRAINING. 3) CLUB AFFILIATION: SKYDIVE SPACELAND. 4) DESCRIPTION OF THE PARACHUTES AND THEIR PACKING RECORDS: THE HARNESS AND CONTAINER WERE JAVELIN MANUFACTURED BY SUNPATH PRODUCTS, INC., THE DATE OF MANUFACTURER WAS 04-2006. THE RESERVE PARACHUTE HAD THE REQUIRED PACKING CARD AND HAD BEEN REPACKED ON 03-07-2008 BY A MASTER RIGGER. THE CYPRESS UNIT FOR THE RESERVE PARACHUTE HAD A BATTERY REPLACEMENT IN SEPT. 2007 AS INDICATED ON THE RESERVE PARACHUTE INSPECTION CARD.