What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) On may 28, 2008, at 10:03 EDT, a Cessna 182 N9386X, registered to civil air patrol, had a bird strike on the leading edge of the right wing. The bird was diving at flight deck when spotted, a banking left turn was executed, one bird went below fuselage the other hit leading edge of right wing. Three souls were onboard. Visual meteorological conditions prevailed at the time. The aircraft sustained leading edge damage and the pilot was not injured. The flight originated at Punta Gorda Florida, on may 28, 2008 approximately 10:03 hours. Aircraft returned, landed at Punta Gorda without further incident.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) ON MAY 28, 2008, AT 10:03 EDT, A CESSNA 182 N9386X, REGISTERED TO CIVIL AIR PATROL, HAD A BIRD STRIKE ON THE LEADING EDGE OF THE RIGHT WING. THE BIRD WAS DIVING AT FLIGHT DECK WHEN SPOTTED, A BANKING LEFT TURN WAS EXECUTED, ONE BIRD WENT BELOW FUSELAGE THE OTHER HIT LEADING EDGE OF RIGHT WING. THREE SOULS WERE ONBOARD. VISUAL METEOROLOGICAL CONDITIONS PREVAILED AT THE TIME. THE AIRCRAFT SUSTAINED LEADING EDGE DAMAGE AND THE PILOT WAS NOT INJURED. THE FLIGHT ORIGINATED AT PUNTA GORDA FLORIDA, ON MAY 28, 2008 APPROXIMATELY 10:03 HOURS. AIRCRAFT RETURNED, LANDED AT PUNTA GORDA WITHOUT FURTHER INCIDENT.