What happened
The FAA’s narrative, in sentence case. The FAA writes it in capitals and removes private details.
(-23) Approximately 1830 local time privacy data omitted and 21 other parachutist departed an aircraft at 13500 ft. while participating in the annual Batavia boogie at the Genesee County Airport (kgvq) in Batavia new york. privacy data omitted Was fatally injured when his parachute did not deploy. privacy data omitted Was a member of the niagara frontier skydivers association and was performing his 800th jump. On July 14, 2008 an inspection as performed on privacy data omitted parachute at the monroe county medical examiners office in rochester NY. Both the main and reserve parachute releases were found still stowed in there holders. Both the main and reserve parachutes released normally when the releases were pulled. Inspection of the packing record show that the reserve parachute was inspected and repacked on 06/18/2008 by a certified parachute rigger certificate number privacy data omitted.
As the FAA filed it
(-23) APPROXIMATELY 1830 LOCAL TIME ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ AND 21 OTHER PARACHUTIST DEPARTED AN AIRCRAFT AT 13500 FT. WHILE PARTICIPATING IN THE ANNUAL BATAVIA BOOGIE AT THE GENESEE COUNTY AIRPORT (KGVQ) IN BATAVIA NEW YORK. ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ WAS FATALLY INJURED WHEN HIS PARACHUTE DID NOT DEPLOY. ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ WAS A MEMBER OF THE NIAGARA FRONTIER SKYDIVERS ASSOCIATION AND WAS PERFORMING HIS 800TH JUMP. ON JULY 14, 2008 AN INSPECTION AS PERFORMED ON ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^ PARACHUTE AT THE MONROE COUNTY MEDICAL EXAMINERS OFFICE IN ROCHESTER NY. BOTH THE MAIN AND RESERVE PARACHUTE RELEASES WERE FOUND STILL STOWED IN THERE HOLDERS. BOTH THE MAIN AND RESERVE PARACHUTES RELEASED NORMALLY WHEN THE RELEASES WERE PULLED. INSPECTION OF THE PACKING RECORD SHOW THAT THE RESERVE PARACHUTE WAS INSPECTED AND REPACKED ON 06/18/2008 BY A CERTIFIED PARACHUTE RIGGER CERTIFICATE NUMBER ^PRIVACY DATA OMITTED^.